The food fair was a program organized by F.2 students. Students were divided into groups of four to create their own food stall. Each food stall needed to prepare two dishes from other countries and decorated their own food stall. We organized this food fair because we could improve our English, drawing shills and cooking skills.
The food fair was held on 7th December, 2007 in Methodist College. On that day, F.1 students paid $2 for each food and the money they paid had been donated to the Doctor's without Bothers'. On that day, students were happy and enjoyable. WE hope the food fair would continued next year.
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This was a good try, Karen. You paragraphed well, but I find the order questionable. I think the last paragraph should be the first since that paragraph, it appears, introduces the food fair.
Furthermore, what is with the flipping between first and third person. Do reporters ever write articles in the first person?
Be that as it may, you've written well!
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